New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I represent a large group of investors that sell properties 17-60 cents on the dollar. I have 18+ years in investing.

$1 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

I am a private investor and entrepreneur. I have started , ran, and sold several successful companies, from telecommunication (sold to AT&T) to real estate management and development. I am open to any and all business opportunities. I’m looking to invest between $5,000 and $1,000,000. Additional funds are available from my network of investing partners and friends.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New Jersey

Commercial Real Estate, Development, Bridge Financing, Debt, Equity Minimum due diligence, quick financing with non traditional requirements

$300,000 to $25,000,000

United States > New York

I am a 26 years old female. I quit my job 4 months ago as a receptionist to get into real estate which I am still pursing. I am currently looking for investment ideas to put my money into. I have my high school diploma and some college education although I never completed.. I am a fast learner, driven and a people person kind kind of gal. I love to be part of innovative projects and grow along with organizations. I would love to be hands on with the potential investment but I am willing to be an advisor. I am looking to invest individually.

$5,000 to $9,000

United States > Alabama

medical physician with extensive funding experience

$1 to $500,000

Turkey > Izmir

Having investments in Turkey as a family company, investing into automotive, energy, construction, estate, real estate sectors. Looking for investments abroad..

$1,000,000 to $99,000,000

United States > Florida

I represent a foreign based asset management/venture capital group who are actively seeking to expand their involvement in promising USA based companies. .

$250,000 to $2,000,000

United States > New York

We are an investment group of fellow MBA graduates who are seeking passive investments that yield short term (less than 3 years) returns in excess 150%+. Our investment group brings not only financial resources but also over 50 years of business experience from fortune 500 companies.We have corporate experience in consumer packaged goods, beauty, pharmaceuticals, finance and consulting industries and bring this industry experience as a value added asset to our investment partnerships.

$50,000 to $250,000