New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I own and operate a small family business that was started in 1929. I also owned and operated a small fitness center. I have a BA in Economics. I'm married, 49 and have 2 teenagers at home. I'm looking for an investment opportunity that will yield immediate income that requires hand-on involvement. My financing comes from my Uncle who is at the top of food chain in the business world. Detail on this will be disclosed at a later date.

$750,000 to $1,200,000

United States > New York

Successful entrepreneur looking to invest in companies with huge potential

$10,000 to $200,000

United States > Minnesota

Looking for good projects to fund. Must show solid return and feasibility. Does not have to be real estate. Private US funds, not platform lending. Financing to almost any project, including 'green projects', large contractors, new hotels, mines, golf course and any realistic project. Please have an executive summary and business plan, with proformas. Include a one page Use of Funds, Draw Schedule, when first revenue occurs, when in profit and proposed return to funding source. Municipal/Govt borrowers welcome. Private parties, please structure an equity partner to bring cash and strong credit to the transaction.

$10,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > Indiana

We work with Investment Bankers who offer up to 100% financing for all types of Commercial Equity and Debt Funding (including Start-Up).

$1,000,000 to $400,000,000

United States > Illinois

My investment objective is to diversify after the meltdown of the mortgage industry. I was in that business for 10 plus years. I have a bacground in the mortgage banking industry also a degree in communication (radio&television). I'm investing as a private investor along with my grandfather.

$100,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

Active investor in early stage companies with defensible positions and proven management. Prefer Technology (including e-commerce), Bio-tech and Real Estate (including Hotel). $250K to $5M

$25,000 to $1,000,000

South Africa > Johannesburg

Looking to Invest in new opportunities. I am an entrepeneur and have been operating an Independant Insurance Brokerage for the past 20 years. I am debt free and am looking at Investment opportunities for the next 10 years.

$100,000 to $250,000

United States > Tennessee

Looking for proven Opportunities. Investment/Equity/Lender.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000