New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Illinois

Specialized Investment Bank

$500,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Georgia

No Up Front Fees! Loans Must make sense. We will Finance thru Loans, JVs, Private Placements, and other Alternative Financing. We will consider ALL loan requests but need Complete Package for FAST Pre-Approval including: Executive Summary and Passport. Client Must also submit Bank Statement to show financial responsibility (client cannot ask for a $2 Million Dollar financing but have nothing in the Bank... Loans must make sense). Fast Pre-Approvals.

$2,000,000 to $5,000,000,000

United States > New York

I have worked with many Entrepreneurs that have developed successful companies. I have a personal Network of investors with in the New York City area that are very interested in investing in new ideas. Our investors are serious, knowledgeable, and are looking for Entrepreneurs who share these same values. If you think you are one of these people, please contact us. Thanks.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Texas

We only work with the most reputable private investors and investment groups in the country who offer very creative short-term and long-term financing secured by commercial real estate and non-recourse stock loans. With our experience and knowledge, we have the capacity to orchestrate and facilitate creative solutions for even the most difficult transaction. $50,000 to $20,000,000. We would love to assist you in financing your small business.

$0 to $20,000,000

United States > New York

Entrepreneur, author, investor. Have started several well respected marketing agencies. They have been sold to NYSE and other public companies. In addition I have served on the board and invested in several other companies in the United States and Europe. I invest alone and as part of a group of semi-retired marketing and management consultants.

$25,000 to $750,000

United States > New York

Looking for good solid businesses to invest in. Equity preferred will also consider debt. For over 10 years I have used my resources to increase sales, profits and cash flow for businesses.

$25,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Nebraska

Looking for developments 100-1000 lots going into to foreclosure.

$1,000,000 to $20,000,000

Costa Rica > San José

Entrepreneurial General Manager with diverse commercial, planning, operational and human resource development experience within the shipping, reefer and fresh produce industry. Lead operational and commercial planning to attain and exceed corporate goals in a range of geographies, business requirements and in diverse economic climates and customer needs. Global Experience: Executive with +20 years of experience who built a long term career at Chiquita Brands International (CBI) and its subsidiary Great White Fleet (GWF). Chiquita is a leading global company that produces high-quality fresh food products. Great White Fleet is Chiquita’s shipping arm and cargo carrier that provides ocean freight and intermodal transportation services.

$25,000 to $100,000