New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

35 year old, single, living in the suburbs outside NYC. Over 10 year in finance on Wall St. and in corporate settings . Possess two graduate degrees from a prestigious Boston based University. Representing both myself and a corporate investment entity. Happy to review a wide range of investment opportunities in an effort to build a robust portfolio.

$1,000 to $500,000

United States > Michigan

Honest and Straightforward CLO Professional. Commercial Real Estate, Construction, Bridge Loans, Multifamily, Industrial, Office, Hotels, Retail, Storage, Business Loans, Equipment Loans, Invoice Financing, Factoring, Land Development, Debt Loans, Hotel Loans, International Loans, Manufacturing

$2,000,000 to $99,000,000

United States > Kentucky

national financial company is a nationwide investment company of 5 partners who buy, sell, lease & wholesale commercial investments. we have been in the residential & commercial investment business for 7 years and we represent a large partner-base of investors nationwide who are buyers and sellers. our background is mortgage/lending is an loan officer, buying, selling & fixing up/rehabbing old homes, buying distressed residential properties, foreclosures, pre-foreclosures and short sales. we are looking mostly for a network of commercial investor who buy mainly hotels, very large skyscraper buildings, gas stations and very large condo projects. we need investors who can buy as high as $10 billion+ and who are serious and ready to buy. our goal to network is strictly for commercial buyers.

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Florida

Our professional experienced staff assist startups, existing business, and entrepreneurs to acquire the funding needed to get your business or idea up and running. We only deal with ACCREDITED CERTIFIED INVESTORS. Founded in 2010. After seeking funding of $23MM for my yacht manufacturing business over the course of 6 years and learning all the aspects of what investors look for in a viable investment and the information to be included in a professional Executive Summary, Business Plan and Proforma to clearly convey the concept and scope of the project for funding, I now pass this knowledge onto the first-time entrepreneurs to assist them in fine-tuning of their Business Plan package and to connect them with QUALIFIED, ACCREDITED, LEGALLY REGISTERED INVESTORS.

$5,000,000 to $90,000,000

United States > Florida

I am a private investor and own several salons in Florida but I want more challenges

$50,000 to $100,000

United States > North Carolina

I am a entrepreneur. I invested a high-tech manufacturing company in China with other partners in 2002. I am one of the directors to run this company and it is very successful. It has facilities in China, USA , UK and Brazil with totally 400 employees. I want to find some new business to invest now. Before I invested the manufacturing company, I have been in IT and network business for 8 years. My preference for the next investment is IT and internet. But I can also invest to other industry.

$200,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

I am looking for a low risk, but high investment. i am someone who could help I have 30 years in food service. We both have to be on the same page.

$50 to $500,000

United States > California

Over 15 years of experience in investing exclusively or a small percentage of businesses with a range of short and or a long-term perspective. Invested in companies that offer strong growth potential and a promising strategic position on their respective markets. Invested for the medium and long term, in order to develop the company's potential to the fullest and thus maximize the return. Increase the value of investments by providing the capital, the expertise, the network and the experience necessary to accelerate the company's growth. Actively work with the company's management by contributing experience and business savvy gained from involvement with other companies with similar growth challenges. • Negotiate new business ventures, start-up ventures, and collapsing ventures; • Mitigate the risk of venture investing; • Develop portfolio of companies in a single venture fund; • Assist in the development of new products or services; • Add value to the company through active participation; • Stimulate growth through active strategic support and constructive involvement; • Screen the technical and business merits of the proposed company; • Build realistic strategic vision of the company's future growth, and create sound management techniques.

$100 to $5,000,000