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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

-Professional intermediary and venture investor seeking new opportunities. -Large firm and boutique firm experience. -20+ years of experience as an advisor and investor in the private sector working with entrepreneurs in small to mid sized companies. -Typically follow a "club approach" and co-invest with groups of individuals/firms. -Also provide M&A/capital advisory services

$100,000 to $1,000,000

Spain > Malaga

I have been investing in FEC's and retail outlets in Europe and the middle east for about 5 years. My background is in Real Estate. I represent a group of private investors and we are particularly interested in Theme park and Leisure developments

$100,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > New Jersey

I am young, enthusiastic individual investor in the North Jersey/NYC area. I graduated from business school in 2010 and I am currently working as a corporate restructuring consultant for a mid size firm in NYC which specializes in providing advisory services to distressed companies, lender groups/committees, etc., inside and outside of bankruptcy across various industries (majority of my experience is in real estate). I have technical financial skill set in financial modeling, valuation (DCF), accounting and auditing. I have passed the CPA (Certified Public Accountant) and CIRA (Certified Insolvency and Restructuring Advisor) exams and I am awaiting certain education/professional requirements to be certified. I have no entrepreneurial investment experience but I am trying to change that as I learn quickly and could add-value to any team. I would plan on being hands off/silent with a small advisory role and on any technical financial/accounting issues I could help with.

$0 to $25,000

United States > New York

I am an accountant, a lawyer and an officer at a mid-size media company that has grown significantly over the past five years as a result of financing, strategic partnerships and the restructuring of obligations. I have partnered with a few key people with a broad range of expertise to invest in small, profitable companies with the potential for serious growth. It is our goal to invest in companies and to use our expertise and relationships to add value.

$0 to $2,000,000

United States > New York

We are a financial, advisory, consultancy, research, and merchant banking services firm formed in 2006. Since 1976, principals of the firm have created niche financial products filling the needs of our clients. We act as a merchant bank advancing our capital along side of our client in order to facilitate a transaction and obtain additional investors. Often, we advance seed capital in the form of capital (cash), advice, support services from other investment banks, architects, and our network of investors (both debt and equity).

$5,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

I have a connection to a funder with substantial funding for the right deals on a debt-equity basis from $20M+ If you are able to answer "yes" to the five questions below please contact me so we can discuss your project(s) further. 1. Do you need funding for a project of $20M+? 2. Are you the person with signatory authority to make the deal? 3. Have you shopped for funding and been turned down? 4. The funder I'm connected to will want to come in at a GP level - not an LP - are you comfortable with that? 5. The funder has a simple requirement of 10% "skin in the game" in the form of liquid collateral. If you like the deal that is offered to you, do you have access to 10% to put in as equity to the partnership?

$20,000,000 to $999,000,000

United States > Michigan

I am the founder and Chairman of a venture group. I am a former professional hockey player, venture capitalist and renowned entrepreneur. An early entrant to the cleantech market, our efforts have garnered global recognition his companies awards include Time Magazine's "Best Inventions 2005," and was awarded the Wall Street Journal's "Technology Innovator" and the World Economic Forum's "Technology Pioneer" awards that same year. In early 2007, he was named a "Young Global Leader" by the Forum. Repeated successes has been acknowledged by the global business community. His insight has been sought by such publications as the New York Times, Time Magazine, Inc., Red Herring and the Wall Street Journal. In addition, he is a regular attendee of the World Economic Forum. He holds a bachelor's degree in computer science from Brandon University, in Brandon, Manitoba.

$50,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Florida

We exclusively seek different companies to inject capital into to help fund. I am part of a institutional investment group/accredited investors that actively seeks projects to inject capital into for an equity portion of their company. The range is from $500k to $5M+ There is no particular industry that is favored when it comes to funding. The investment group have no geography limits,as the group recently opened offices in Spain

$500,000 to $5,000,000