New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Connecticut

I graduated from Bryant University with a Bachelors degree in Communications and Marketing. I am seeking an investment opportunity in the New York City restaurant industry. My goal is to own and operate my own restaurant, but for now, I'd like to enter the space as an individual investor. I will be living in Brooklyn, NY, but am open to other areas in the city. I look forward to connecting.

$100,000 to $150,000

United States > California

Having worked with financial institutions, Now I focus more on Business Consulting and Risk management. I'm working with one of the most reliable investment group. My investors are ready to give funding to your business once its considered as viable

$250,000 to $200,000,000

United States > Maryland

New to real estate investing but not new to other types of investing. Worked in sales for AT&T for 30 years. Private investor.

$5,000 to $150,000

United States > New Jersey

I am brand new to the Angel Investment world but am certainly serious about it. My profession is in the New Business Development-Sales in the construction industry I am interested in investing, and to broaden my portfolio and increase earnings while helping others. I prefer investments in the U.S. I am a private investor

$1,000 to $25,000

United States > New York

I have been in banking for 26 years project manager of lend america mortgage bank within these two months........ we have over 2 billion dollars in joint venure

$350,000 to $5,000,000

United States > New York

extensive experience in corporate finance (accounting, controlling, audit)

$0 to $50,000

United States > New York

I am an MBA and CFA charterholder with 5+ years in Equity Research and and Corporate Finance. Currently working for a Fortune 100 financial se services company based in NYC. Looking to invest in a small business and c contribute exceptional strategic thinking and financial discipline.

$0 to $50,000

United States > New Jersey

I've always been interested in small businesses and entrepreneurs. In the past I worked at Goldman Sachs and realized I hate big companies. I then went to work for a start up internet company for a while before returning to work for the family business. I'm interested in working with exciting companies that are looking to grow and make a difference in the world. I've invested in hedge funds and other investments and it's not very much fun so looking for something that's more interesting and tangible.

$25,000 to $250,000