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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I have invested in real estate since 1974 and have been a real estate broker since 1984. I handle my own and family investments. I acquired a series 7 license in 1986. I have purchased and sold securities for 20 years. I consider myself an informed investor. I need to see some movie private placement offerings. I also qualify based on net worth requirements.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

Married couple with high buisness interest seeking to get involved in fun buisness with people we enjoy working. Looking for a long term vision to build wealth.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Massachusetts

Mechanical engineer with MBA and substantial business experience.

$1,000,000 to $500,000,000

United States > New York

We are a corporate syndicate group.

$100,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Maine

i am a new investor looking for my first few deals, either to buy them at a discount or to match properties with other investors that may not quite fit my portfolio. i have owned several businesses and done some real estate transactions in the past. i am a private investor.

$0 to $200,000

United States > New York

very successful, ,. retail,. automotive stock market etc somewhat sane, like to see other people succeed, good luck to all,. let the games begin,, ps life is short, go for it, ron

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United States > New York

Background in hotels, restaurants, real estate ownership, management and development. Seeking viable operating businesses with existing or strong potential for positive cash flow to achieve strong returns via cash flow as opposed to appreciation. Have capital to invest in smaller sized deals ($1m to $5m) and good network for investments in excess of $5m.

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United States > New York

I have been working in the Food industry for the past 8 years and closed significant deals with major retailers and brands. Deep knowledge of the Food Supply Chain. I am interested in bringing strategy expertise and network.

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