New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Florida

Our investment group funds oil & gas projects.

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > North Carolina

I am a entrepreneur. I invested a high-tech manufacturing company in China with other partners in 2002. I am one of the directors to run this company and it is very successful. It has facilities in China, USA , UK and Brazil with totally 400 employees. I want to find some new business to invest now. Before I invested the manufacturing company, I have been in IT and network business for 8 years. My preference for the next investment is IT and internet. But I can also invest to other industry.

$200,000 to $1,000,000

United States > North Carolina

I have run a family owned group of businesses fro the past twenty five years. The businesses included industrial development, logistics, fulfillment and trucking operations. In the last five years I've invested in several startups ranging from areas of experience to consumer product development. I have my MBA from Duke's Fuqua School.

$100,000 to $2,500,000

United States > New York

Dear Sir/Madame, I am a representative of the Russian investing company, which is looking for investment opportunities in the USA (NY region is desirable). We are willing to invest from USD 20 to 200 million. We have some requirements for the prospective invest-project: 1) We will buy a controlling stake (up to 85%). At least 15% of the project must be owned by the proprietor (possessor) of the project. 2) Line of business - any. However, construction projects would be the preference. 3) There should exist a detailed business plan, which will be assessed by our experts. 4) Cost recovery (return) period is about 6 years. Should you have any questions feel free to contact me via e-mail. Kind regards, Alexey

$10,000,000 to $200,000,000

United States > New York

30 years in the financial Industry helping business owners expand their business. And funding for Real estate projects.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Turkey > New York

i am 40 years old. i'm individual investor.i live in Turkey. i would like to invest in NYC any interesting project. i have a small company. i have some investments in turkey at various areas. so that will be first time out of my country. i have been in nyc few times. my experience usually wholesale products from east west such as china,india,indonesia.i can be silent investor give to money. or i can attend according to project with some products. sorry my english not enough:) but i have a lawyer in nyc. so he is following my business process.

$10,000 to $50,000

United States > Georgia

An individual investor interested in real estate and oil.

$500,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

Retired CEO of public medical device company Angel investor in private biotech company; 12x return over 6 years Founder and lead investor of medical device start-up based on IP which I found and licensed from a major research university

$25,000 to $100,000