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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > glenn dale

I am specifically looking for short term returns (0-5 yrs). A student of the university of maryland- college park. private investor.

$1,000 to $10,000

United States > New York

I am the head of a law firm and have invested in many start-ups and later stage companies. Investments have ranged from $50,000 to $500,000.

$50,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I am a physician in New York with extra investment capital available to apply towards businesses that I feel would be fun interacting with.

$1 to $5,000

United States > Florida

I have over 15 years of executive-level experience in managing and investing in real estate.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

Invested over $4,000,000 Owned / ran several projects Private ad group investor

$25,000 to $3,000,000

United States > New York

I am an entrepreneur form Eastern Europe looking to expand my business in US, at this point in NY or NJ

$200,000 to $300,000

United States > Connecticut

I represent a private company, which is a investor and real estate developer based in Connecticut, USA. The company is a partner in several large projects, including the planning, design and construction of a Town Center (a mixed use commercial, retail, residential and government office development) for a town in Connecticut located within ten minutes of two of the largest casinos in the world, which will provide approximately 800 residential units and up to 1,000,000 square feet of retail, commercial and governmental office space.

$250,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Missouri

We are a highly-experienced capital and consulting group located in Kansas City. Our group specializes in delivering the highest levels of funding to a wide breadth of commercial endeavors. In addition, we maintain strong contacts with several firms focused on meeting the needs of small-to-midsize businesses. Your funding requests will be handled with the utmost professionalism and confidentiality.

$1,000,000 to $999,000,000