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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New Jersey

I want to help peoples dreams come true and make profit at same time

$0 to $100,000

United States > New York

Proven organizational skills with the ability to direct multiple business affairs. Demonstrates facilitating support services and managing fast paced office operations. A plethora of versatile skills transfers into any administrative setting to establish high levels of efficiency and productivity. Diligent attention to details resulting in superior customer service and high levels of client satisfaction. Trusted: Partner, Manager, Investor Located in New York City. Sep. 2008 - Dec. 2009 Lancaster University Management School (UK) Master of Science (Full-Time) in Operational Research and Management Science (GPA 3.2) Oct. 2005 - Jul. 2008 Lancaster University Management School (UK) Bachelor of Science, Second class honours (Division one) in Business Studies (GPA 3.3) Multitude of contacts in most industries. Anticipated involvement: hands-on & advisory.

$0 to $1,000,000

United States > Massachusetts

I have invested in public and private companies in several industries. I have real estate holdings as well and have started my own businesses in the past. I work as an advisor and angel capital provider to early stage businesses.

$25,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New Jersey

We are part of a consortium consisting of financial institutions, hedge funds, investors, etc. We have the ability to review projects and based upon their merits we identify the correct vehicle to bring those projects to realization. The vehicle may be a loan, or equity investment or combination of both. Only serious people should contact us.

$100,000 to $9,000,000

United States > California

I fund government and private corporations projects worldwide. Minimum amount is $10M. SERIOUS BORROWERS ONLY. Should have a sound and complete Business Plan. I will only respond to borrowers who submits and Executive Summary. Preference will be given to projects in the US and in Asia. Looking for government or JV deals. -private investor

$10,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > Wisconsin

I have broad manufacturing experience with a few small ventures of my own in the past. I've worked in consumer packaging, tool and die, foundry equipment, metal fabrication for industrial equipment and most recently in Long Term Care making products for nursing homes that were both simple medical devices as described by the FDA and non- medical devices. I've been building business cases for new product development and new product introductions as part of my current role and have traveled to Asia and Mexico for design reviews and production approvals. I'm looking to take my 10 years of product development, international sourcing and marketing experience along with my manufacturing experience to a more flexible, dynamic and agressive environment. I'd like to be part of something that has higher potential than standard returns and willing to take calculated risks to get there.

$10,000 to $100,000

Mexico > Hermosillo

I am a real estate investor since 1999 and looking to invest in high potential growing companies, if you're looking for money I have it, but if you're looking for your business advice I can't help you there . if you have a good plan with advisors and experts in your business arena, I have the money.

$30,000 to $500,000

United States > New Jersey

Our small brokerage/VC group has wide network connections with funding sources of different flavors.

$10,000,000 to $300,000,000