New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Massachusetts

PhD in Business Administration with global experience in senior corporate positions. Looking for investments that can deliver 50% in 3 years. Real Estate investments >$2,000,000 Start-ups >$500,000 Grow >$500,000

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Florida

I am an entrepreneur who has funded and started several online companies seeking to expand my business

$100 to $100,000

United States > Kansas

I am a Chemical Engineer by degree. I have worked as a Process Engineer and recently moved into a Commissioning/Start-up roll Currently employed by an EPC contractor. Would like to help startup businesses by providing the initial capital.

$0 to $20,000

United States > New Jersey

25 years of experience in international investment banking area globally (Americas, Asia, Europe and South America) with the second largest Japanese Investment Bank. Many mega deals with governments, supranationals and top international corporates. Extensive knowledge of financing and funding networks.

$10,000,000 to $5,000,000,000

United States > North Carolina

I'm an entrepreneur

$1,000 to $3,000

United States > California

Serial entrepreneur with two exits to Fortune 500 companies.

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > New Jersey

Our investment model is for acquisition and development only and not a vehicle for the funding of fully developed properties. It is required that the borrower is the titled owner of the property or has control of the property by purchase contract and that all entitlements have been acquired and development can be commenced at opening of the loan. That is, all engineering plans, construction drawings, permits and approvals and budgets are completed, therefore the project is "Shovel Ready". The guidelines are as follows: Term: 60 months. Rate : 8.25% (subject to underwriting and market). Minimum Loan Amount: $150,000,000. LTC: 100% Recourse: Non-Recourse to Principals after construction phase. Disbursements: Loan disbursed to escrow account in equal disbursements over the first 12, 24 or 36 months of the loan. Gross Profit Margin: 30% or better after debt, and average annual return greater than 15% is required.

$150,000,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Missouri

Successful serial entrepreneur with varied background and skills from start up to marketing to exit strategies. Aware of environmental issues and how they coordinate with corporate profit structures. Continually active in working towards reducing governmental interference with viable businesses. Interested in investments that lean towards benefiting society as well as making substantial profits.

$50,000 to $250,000