New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Louisiana

36, Married, Louisiana. Sports Industry/ Co-Owner of professional sports team. Degrees: Sports Marketing B.S./ Business Administration/Ass. Mutal Funds/Sports Industry/Stocks/Bonds. Silent/Advisory. Individual investor.

$1,000 to $60,000

United States > Georgia

have been in Real Estate for the last 15 years

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Nevada

Interested in investing for private use, Background in real estate within the US looking to expand international. My background is in website development, international consultant. Investment included offshore, real estate and website development

$1,000,000 to $3,000,000

United States > California

I personally have 28 years of experience in commercial finance. Currently my flagship product is a funding strategy created by the SEC in 1982; the Reg D Private Placement. This strategy has been extremely successful over the years. It is estimated that over $40 million a day is raised for entrepreneurs using this structure. Many who seek funding make the mistake of believing a business plan is all that is needed. Wrong! Sophisticated investors expect that companies seeking financing are savvy enough to have a complete prospectus that respects state and federal securities laws, as well as a well-thought-out business plan. I will be happy to review your proposal free of obligation or cost.

$100,000 to $15,000,000

United States > New Jersey

25 years of experience in international investment banking area globally (Americas, Asia, Europe and South America) with the second largest Japanese Investment Bank. Many mega deals with governments, supranationals and top international corporates. Extensive knowledge of financing and funding networks.

$10,000,000 to $5,000,000,000

United States > Illinois

We invest in early stage information technology companies, including enterprise software and services, Internet infrastructure software, wireless applications, and digital media.

$1,000,000 to $99,000,000

United States > Texas

We have formed numerous capitol formation ventures ranging from real estate, renewable energy, mining, gaming/entertainment, and the film industry. We have been involved directly or indirectly in financings totaling in excess of 1 billion dollars. Our currant focus is primairly in mining and renewable energy.

$10,000,000 to $25,000,000

United States > Missouri

We are a highly-experienced capital and consulting group located in Kansas City. Our group specializes in delivering the highest levels of funding to a wide breadth of commercial endeavors. In addition, we maintain strong contacts with several firms focused on meeting the needs of small-to-midsize businesses. Your funding requests will be handled with the utmost professionalism and confidentiality.

$1,000,000 to $999,000,000