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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I was one of the first employees of Micromuse Inc., a very successful start-up from the 1990's. Micromuse provided network management solutions and was eventually acquired by IBM. My role at Micromuse was VP of Sales and I was the key player in driving our sales into internet service providers, telcos and web hosting companies. I want to provide seed/angel investment funds into companies operating in any high tech field. Depending on the opportunity I am comfortable being either a passive investor or taking a more direct role.

$15,000 to $35,000

United States > Washington

Just starting out as an investor, did a couple startups before absolving to work in IT for software company headquartered in Redmond, Seattle.

$10,000 to $50,000

United States > South Carolina

Have been in the private equity and venture capital investing business for the last 12 years. Having invested in over 50+ other private equity funds and made direct investments in over 150+ businesses, I have seen a wide variety of industry segments, investment niches, and am very open to various vertical market focuses. If a transaction is too large, I many times can arrange a syndication to accomplish the needed financing as well. My primary objective or focus is North America.

$100,000 to $2,500,000

United States > Michigan

Honest and Straightforward CLO Professional. Commercial Real Estate, Construction, Bridge Loans, Multifamily, Industrial, Office, Hotels, Retail, Storage, Business Loans, Equipment Loans, Invoice Financing, Factoring, Land Development, Debt Loans, Hotel Loans, International Loans, Manufacturing

$2,000,000 to $99,000,000

United States > California

We are direct lending groups. We specialize in multifamily, apartment building, strip mall, office building, warehouse and most categories of residential and commercial properties. Alternative energy projects such as wind and solar projects. You will need 1 to 3 page summary for our review. We also fund start-up trucking companies.

$2,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > New York

I have over 15 years experience in sales, marketing, business development, finance and management. At the age of 27 I became senior-vice president of the world’s largest bank, Citigroup, perhaps its’ youngest. I was a vice- president at Credit Suisse,. raised over 200 million dollars for start-up, growth and late stage investments. Focus includes nanotechnology, chemicals, storage, clean tech and software. I was quoted in The Wall Street Journal, The New York Times and Business Week. I am a Prince of Wales Delegate and attended the University of Cambridge Business and the Environment Program. . SpecialtiesClean Technology, Energy, Water Technologies, Nanotechnology, Chemicals

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > New York

I am an individual investor looking for opportunities especially in Emerging Markets but am also keenly looking at new products/services for the developed markets. I have a background in corporate finance and strategy.

$1 to $50,000

United States > New Jersey

My priority is Safety of Capital and Risk Adjusted Return. My expected Return is Bank Rate + 7%. I would like to consider all decent proposals with good details and solid fundamental. Experienced people are in good chance of getting funded.

$1 to $10,000