New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Washington

Yocam Holdings LLC is a privately held for-profit investment firm with headquarters in Bellevue, WA. Founded in September 2006 by five members of the Yocam family, the firm's partnership manages a diverse set of investments within the company's portfolio while actively pursuing various venture capital opportunities. The firm's investment portfolio consists of multiple components across multiple asset classes such as investments in emerging technology, pharmacogenomics, real estate, and entertainment.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > New Jersey

I'm an individual (single male) investor living close to NYC. I currently own and operate a consulting business of my own in the technology sector. I'm interested in investing in interesting business proposals that either fit a unique niche or after analysis and market research have a high probability of success. I have investment experience in real estate and the equity markets. I can also potentially partner with other investors. I would usually prefer an advisory or hands off role but depending on the business may be interested in something further.

$1 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

Commercial funding from $100M to $1B Up to 100% LTC on new construction, 90% LTV on Refi’s and 80% on Cash out. Focused Projects: Hotels, Resorts, Condo Projects, Assisted Living, Office Buildings, Retail, Medical, Multi Family, Industrial, Refineries, Power Plants, Casinos, Sports Stadiums These are ‘Full Doc’ programs so please be prepared to provide all documents required (varies per the scenario). This is NOT Hard Money and rates vary from the 4’s to the 6’s depending on the project. Points, closing costs, interest carry etc. can be rolled into the loan (case by case). Seller carrybacks may also be allowed. Have a stalled project that the lender pulled out of? Send it! Prefer US and Canada projects but will look at international and higher loan amounts also on a case by case basis. I will send you an intake to get you started. TY!

$100,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > Maryland

An entrepreneur with 35 years investment in real estate, tax lien certificate investing, restaurants, night clubs, tanning salons and other small businesses.I am currently a real estate developer. I posses strong managerial and organization skills. I am detail oriented with a wide variety of knowledge of small business and real estate deals. I have modest experience in the syndication of historic and low income tax credit deals, I've co-developed small hotels and apartment buildings and partnered in various other investment opportunities.

$50,000 to $250,000

United Kingdom > Fraserburgh

I have high-level experience and a sustained record of success investing in all-encompassing energy, utilities and environmental marketplace.Extensive background in diverse consultancy organisations,managing complex change projects to meet strategic objectives.I have unique technical &commercial skills in the energy sub- sectors.I love to help entrepreneurs develop new commercial opportunities while minimizing business risk and maximizing market opportunities.I know the hassles&troubles of acquiring funding, which many entrepreneurs and small business owners go through,so I try my best to help them achieve this by eliminating much of those hurdles,which I term unnecessary because I believe there are so many golden minds out there.I am a team player, always available to assist and give good and relevant financial,business&strategic advice while making the project and investment a huge success.I am passionate about good projects because i believe it's the gateway to a better world

$10,000 to $25,000,000

United States > California

I was in construction business in the Middle East. I did international trading extensively from China and India. to the KSA I have management experience

$15,000 to $150,000

United States > New York

I am a individual investor. I live with my wife and my daughter in the New York city area. I am willing to invest in concept ideas and want to involve hands-on or in the advisory board. Thanks and looking forward to working with you.

$1,000 to $5,000

United States > Pennsylvania

Semi - retired, looking for a partner to invest. Honest and straight forward, looking for same. Return on equity is critical.

$100,000 to $250,000