New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I am a private investor and entrepreneur. I have started , ran, and sold several successful companies, from telecommunication (sold to AT&T) to real estate management and development. I am open to any and all business opportunities. I’m looking to invest between $5,000 and $1,000,000. Additional funds are available from my network of investing partners and friends.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

United States > North Carolina

I am looking for a company that I can reach the highest return on my investment.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

Investment fund with an interest in all projects that have potential to be a strong money generator, and represents a reasonable risk. Experiences/ Background Work closely with management from a board level to assist in the continuous "intrinsic improvement" of the business through revenue enhancement, margin improvement, working capital reductions and add- on acquisitions. In the past, we have been successful in assisting dozens of companies in achieving their financial objectives.

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

International Marketer who has/is working for brands such as Nike, Hurley, Converse & HBO - looking to be an individual investor either in advisory or hands-on (will wash floors/get hands dirty) role

$10,000 to $125,000

United States > California

We are looking for companies looking to go public.We have arrangements with a number of investment bankers in the US and Europe.

$1,000,000 to $500,000,000

United States > New York

I am looking for other business opportunities to invest in. I am an entrepreneur who started and sold two different sales and marketing companies and currently is the CEO of a non profit and athletic organization. I am young and driven and know I can help in various different ways.

$1,000 to $30,000

United States > Maryland

I am an IT professional with over 12 years experience working in the IT departments of two different financial institution. I have a First degree in Electrical Engineering and professional IT certifications. I have not been into investment before now and wish to start now on a rather small scale. Am more interested in investments that will yield returns on a continuous basis ( monthly, quarterly, yearly etc ) and I do not have to be involved in the day to day running of the organization. I can be silent so far I get returns on my investment steady. The organization can be one that's looking at expanding their business, starting a new product etc.

$5,000 to $10,000

United States > Florida

I have over 20 years experience in the financial industry. I began my career as a broker/trader and now specializing in financial PR and corporate consulting and restructuring plans for public companies, I have has raised more than $45 million for various public companies in the last eight years. In addition, I have been instrumental in assisting six companies attain public trading status through reverse-shell mergers.

$25,000 to $100,000