New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > California

Involved with Research & Development in polymers for about 25 years. PhD in polymers from USC, Ex MBA from UCLA. V.P. of Research & Development for last 10 years in a large corporation. Extensive background in intellectual property rights, acquisition and protection. Have been involved with several entrepreneurial developments over last decade.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

Married couple with high buisness interest seeking to get involved in fun buisness with people we enjoy working. Looking for a long term vision to build wealth.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Georgia

Private Investor and Group investors.Certified Money Broker. Many years of Investing. Private Funding for your deals! Private Money Brokering for Your Growth.

$500,000 to $160,000,000

United States > New York

We provide funding to existing businesses. Generally, we focus on restaurants, auto shops, retailers, florists, nail salons/spas, bars, liquor stores, convenience stores, etc.

$1 to $500,000

United States > New York

Meny is the Chief Executive Officer of a marketing and business services firm headquartered in Brooklyn, NY. Renowned for his ability to provide clients with advanced business-boosting tactics and strategic marketing solutions for achieving success, Meny has worked to elevate the status and popularity of prominent brands spanning a variety of industries including corporate, not-for-profit and institutional. He has been honored with multiple legislative awards for his work in encouraging entrepreneurism amongst New York business and is a member of the Brooklyn Chamber of Commerce. He is also the founder of Let’s Talk Business, a popular email series that is sent to thousands of online followers each week, which discusses powerful strategies that can be used by companies and organizations to help sustain further growth. A longtime entrepreneur himself, he has been featured in Crain’s Magazine, The Daily News, The New York Ent

$5,000 to $15,000

United States > Maryland

President and ceo of a Real Estate Investment Development Company

$1,000,000 to $9,000,000,000

United States > Florida

I represent a foreign based asset management/venture capital group who are actively seeking to expand their involvement in promising USA based companies. .

$250,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Indiana

A Bsc (hons) degree. Had started more than a dozen businesses over the past 20 years. Started as a day options trader during the high tech boom of 2000. Then moved into Real Estate investment mostly in Chicago metro and Heath care sectors., which I still do today.

$150,000 to $550,000