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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

Brasil > Tatui

I'm an individual interested in participating on promising projects

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I am a mid 60 year old retired financial services executive with 30+ years experience in finance as a CFO, strategic planning, M&A, risk and pricing with an MBA in international finance. I currently volunteer as a small business mentor and also mentor mid level executives. I sit on the board of a non-profit foundation and an elementary school as well as a financially focused advisory Council. My preference is to play an advisory role with hands on involvement as needed. I am an individual investor who is keen to help small businesses that drive our economy succeed.

$10,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

Working as a lead generator for a partner who has many year of experience in real estate and investing. Just recently his group committed $25MM for a domestic online auction firm. They are also able to fund internationally as they just closed a deal funding a Chinese company for $100MM. He seeking new investments with his base criteria is that the firm is not a start up and able to show revenue/sales history

$100,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Virginia

Managing Director of V*** Investment Partnership and a graduate of Virginia Military Institute. My professional background has been primarily in banking, with a short stint with the government as a Special Assistant to the Director of Community Reinvestment of the Federal Home Loan Bank Board. I have owned and operated residential and commercial financing operations since 1997, with a particular focus on creative commercial lending. Our market is worldwide, and we specialize in customizing financing packages that most banking institutions could not handle, or even have the imagination to properly structure. We accept only a limited number of clients per business quarter, to allow personal attention to your project.

$100,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Alabama

I am a partner with my brother in a Sawmill MFG company with about 50 employees. We build portable band saw machines and it's support equipment for sawing lumber from logs in the woods. We currently build 4 sizes of sawmill machines. The support equipment include edgers, saw blade sharpeners and setters. We have a CNC machine shop and produce all the basic parts that we use. These machines are mostly used in small family type operations. Additionally we a one of the largest distributors of thin kerf wood band saws in the US. Our web site is www.cookssaw.com We have a mailing list of over 90,000 that we send catalogs every 2 months. We are interested in being an investing partner in fabricating industry as well as in the lumber making industry that we are presently in.

$25,000 to $250,000

United States > California

Over 15 years of experience in investing exclusively or a small percentage of businesses with a range of short and or a long-term perspective. Invested in companies that offer strong growth potential and a promising strategic position on their respective markets. Invested for the medium and long term, in order to develop the company's potential to the fullest and thus maximize the return. Increase the value of investments by providing the capital, the expertise, the network and the experience necessary to accelerate the company's growth. Actively work with the company's management by contributing experience and business savvy gained from involvement with other companies with similar growth challenges. • Negotiate new business ventures, start-up ventures, and collapsing ventures; • Mitigate the risk of venture investing; • Develop portfolio of companies in a single venture fund; • Assist in the development of new products or services; • Add value to the company through active participation; • Stimulate growth through active strategic support and constructive involvement; • Screen the technical and business merits of the proposed company; • Build realistic strategic vision of the company's future growth, and create sound management techniques.

$100 to $5,000,000

United States > California

I represent an trust that has been in business going on 50 years. They are highly interested in all types of energy projects. Also construction, real estate, hotels, casinos and resorts MUST HAVE SOME EQUITY IN PROJECT PRESENTING. Will consider equity position and exit strategy. Have other relationships with other private sources which will entertain JV opportunities also Commercial Hard Money Minimum $10 Mil and Up ?????

$25,000,000 to $950,000,000

United States > Hawaii

I am a person with a lot of capital and want to begin investing

$80,000,000 to $1,000,000