New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Minnesota

My firm helps companies find non-dilutive capital from city and states in the US. We have raised 100's of millions for companies that can create 50 or more jobs in a five year period and are capable of moving operations to a pro-business state that offers these aggressive cash grants. Were an alternative to Angel and VC investors because we negotiate cash grants that are non-dilutive and forgivable in exchange for creating jobs. However, the business must be able to expand, relocate or consolidate out of its respective location. We have 20 years of experience matching growing viable businesses to communities that will invest in your future. www.ecodevllc.com 952-944-0012 office

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Washington D.C.

Lawyer in Washington, DC software analysis Vice-President Capital Management (CFTC Registration Hedge Fund), VP US Securities and Exchange Commission, Special Counsel

$50,000 to $1,500,000

United States > Kentucky

national financial company is a nationwide investment company of 5 partners who buy, sell, lease & wholesale commercial investments. we have been in the residential & commercial investment business for 7 years and we represent a large partner-base of investors nationwide who are buyers and sellers. our background is mortgage/lending is an loan officer, buying, selling & fixing up/rehabbing old homes, buying distressed residential properties, foreclosures, pre-foreclosures and short sales. we are looking mostly for a network of commercial investor who buy mainly hotels, very large skyscraper buildings, gas stations and very large condo projects. we need investors who can buy as high as $10 billion+ and who are serious and ready to buy. our goal to network is strictly for commercial buyers.

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Arkansas

Investment Criteria While the merits of each investment will vary, we evaluate your venture according to the following criteria. Management Team We look for teams of high-quality entrepreneurs with a track record of leadership and performance, either in the company's specific industry or in prior entrepreneurial ventures. We also look at your team's passion for and commitment to the new business idea, and your ability to inspire confidence among future stakeholders, including employees, potential customers, and investors. As we will be working together as partners, your team's credibility is essential. In addition, your team must be open to and comfortable with receiving input provided by angel investors. Market Opportunity We invest in solutions that address major problems for significantly large target markets. Your company must demonstrate a strategy to claim significant share of this market.

$100,000 to $600,000,000

Belgium > Heverlee

Business mostly in real estate in Belgium, Europe. I am US citizen by birth, 54 years old and ready to Invest in my country of birth. I would like to be involved in the business I will invest.

$100,000 to $300,000

United States > Colorado

we work with immigration group in South Korea and we looking to U.S. project make immigration visa for our client. if you have profit project in regional area which is approve from city, county, state or government for EB5 visa condition with prove official document. we can bring on large investor group to cover on your project less than 50% of total project amount that will be start invest amount with $500,000.00 per client and no limit on investors join in the project with amount and condition of your project. any question please let us know at uscvaxles@gmail.com

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > California

Movie Producer,real estate ivestor

$25,000 to $75,000

United States > New York

President / CEO of multi-million dollar company specializing in the Real Estate and Foreclosure Industry

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000