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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

Meny is the Chief Executive Officer of a marketing and business services firm headquartered in Brooklyn, NY. Renowned for his ability to provide clients with advanced business-boosting tactics and strategic marketing solutions for achieving success, Meny has worked to elevate the status and popularity of prominent brands spanning a variety of industries including corporate, not-for-profit and institutional. He has been honored with multiple legislative awards for his work in encouraging entrepreneurism amongst New York business and is a member of the Brooklyn Chamber of Commerce. He is also the founder of Let’s Talk Business, a popular email series that is sent to thousands of online followers each week, which discusses powerful strategies that can be used by companies and organizations to help sustain further growth. A longtime entrepreneur himself, he has been featured in Crain’s Magazine, The Daily News, The New York Ent

$5,000 to $15,000

United States > New York

Attorney in the New York Area that has an interest in angel investing and has done so in a number of companies.

$1,000 to $250,000

United States > North Carolina

Tim’s career spans over thirty years as a business owner, corporate executive, consultant, and scholar. He spent the first sixteen years of his career as an entrepreneur, creating, building, and managing several successful companies, including a commercial banking firm that catered to vendors and manufacturers using equipment financing as a catalyst for driving incremental sales. This business was acquired in 1996 and went through multiple mergers and acquisitions that ultimately led Tim to join Citigroup’s CitiCapital division as Vice President. For the next seven years he managed the business technology sector responsible for Cisco Systems, Oracle, and other major companies, building this group’s sales to over $200 million. As a consultant, coach, and Chairman of Funding, his clients have included well known companies such as Ericsson, Lucent, Corning Optics, Herman Miller, Haworth, Steelcase, as well as many small and midsize businesses.

$250,000 to $4,000,000

United States > Minnesota

I spent 17 years in advertising helping companies grow their business. I have worked on many product launches for Fortune 500 companies as well as helping start-ups take a foothold in new markets. I am interested in investing financially in new companies as well as utilizing my skills as a Creative to create equity.

$1,000 to $20,000

United States > Hawaii

Our Group Buys and Sells Commodity Products for all energy products Worldwide. D-2, Jet Fuel, Bio Diesel, Muzut, Gold, Diamonds,Saudi Grade Crude and more are just a few of the many products we can Buy or Sell Our Group also has access to Hedge Funds and Insurance Funds that will Finance large world wide transactions. We would love to speak to you if you have access to End Sources (Mandates) on the Buy or Sell for End Products Worldwide We love to also talk to you about funding any large products worldwide. We have a Green Fund that would love to discuss all Energy Projects that need funding Worldwide. Thanks for your business

$1,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > New Jersey

This is my first shot at "angel" investing. I have plenty of experience investing in equity markets, and some in real estate. My "day job" is as a software engineer.

$1,000 to $40,000

United States > New Jersey

Extensive real estate investment financing experience. At this point I am interested in fix and flip opportunities. Private investor and I manage a small investment group.

$10,000 to $200,000

United States > New Jersey

I ve experince in the various fields (import/export, real estate , financing , food , etc.) Looking for the initiatives in the USA with growth (both domestic & international) potential.

$20,000 to $2,000,000