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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I'm in the trucking business. Looking for the right business and person to mentor and invest in.

$0 to $200,000

United Kingdom > London

Stockbroking and run private fund

$5,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Colorado

PRIVATE INVESTOR

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

We are a financial, advisory, consultancy, research, and merchant banking services firm formed in 2006. Since 1976, principals of the firm have created niche financial products filling the needs of our clients. We act as a merchant bank advancing our capital along side of our client in order to facilitate a transaction and obtain additional investors. Often, we advance seed capital in the form of capital (cash), advice, support services from other investment banks, architects, and our network of investors (both debt and equity).

$5,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Texas

We are growing oil and gas company would like to diversify our profits into other types of business at a low level. Attractive proposals would be considered

$10,000,000 to $20,000,000

United States > Kansas

My name is Trevor and I have been in business all my life. I am part owner of an office/supply store and the sole owner of Calvin Well Service, LLC. (Oil & Gas industry). I have invested from $500 dollars in some cases up to $20,000 in others. I have a top of the line accounting team that can handle any situation that arises. I am looking to be a silent partner, but want the capabilities to see how the business is doing at any time I desire. I am currently an individual investor, but have a small group capable of investing $100,000 if needed. I am currently looking to invest in smaller amounts due to the short time involved with this website.

$1 to $15,000

United States > New York

Hello, Seeking to leverage on my 10+ years in corporate banking to make a financial and qualitative contribution to serious entrepreneurs, seeking a good return on investment AND the possibility to help my community/region and family of entrepreneurs to achieve their goal. I m a first generation American and am sensitive to challenges minority or non minority starters encounter to achieve their dreams. I am an individual investor, fairly new to this. Experienced, serious and open. Kind Regards.Karim.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Alabama

FOUNDED COMPOSITE MANUFACTURING FIRM (INDUSTRIAL) 35 YEARS SUCCESSFUL OPERATION, IMPORTED EXPORTED, BUT BUT BUT PRIMARILY SOLD PRODUCT WITHIN THE U.S.. SEEKING SOUND BUSINESS INVESTMENT.

$25,000 to $1,000,000