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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Tennessee

We are doing private hard money lending in GA, FLA, TN, SC, NC, MS, ARK with high rates with people with minor credit with equity also doing church financing in rural places when bank won't lend because of church are smaller. Been managing partner for 23 yrs in private mortgage banking also represent a private hard money group.

$25,000 to $40,000

United States > Colorado

I am a contact source for many lenders who have funds for the purchase and refi of investment property and many types of business loans including purchasing of commercial & residential mortgage notes. We have been engaged in the financing of real estate investment property and businesses since 1975.

$700,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New York

I am an accredited Investor looking for investments

$100,000 to $200,000

United States > New York

MBA - Finance Undergrad - MIS & Strategic Management Wharton educated Tech & Finance background, entrepreneurial spirit, analytical, and strategic thinker. Require hands-on involvement in potential investment.

$0 to $500,000

United States > New York

Will consider a wide variety of investments and structures on sizes ranging from $50,000 to $500,000 with the potential for add-on's. I have worked in the asset management industry for over 10 years investing in both debt and equity instruments. I am familiar with a variety of industries and have an extensive rolodex. I am a private investor that will invest independently or bring along several family offices.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

Working as a lead generator for a partner who has many year of experience in real estate and investing. Just recently his group committed $25MM for a domestic online auction firm. They are also able to fund internationally as they just closed a deal funding a Chinese company for $100MM. He seeking new investments with his base criteria is that the firm is not a start up and able to show revenue/sales history

$100,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Texas

Own Texas oil and gas company, looking to diversify into other industries

$0 to $4,000,000

United States > Florida

Private investor.

$0 to $200,000