New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

Based in Manhattan, New York City, with 25 years’ experience in business and real estate finance, I am a direct investor and I have syndication/participation relationships with banks, pension funds, insurance companies, REITS, hedge funds and private equity firms. Term loan minimums: $4,000,000; Revolving credit facility minimums: $2,000,000. For: Real Estate Owners/Investors/Developers; Manufacturers; Distributors; Wholesalers; Construction Builders & GC Firms; Travel, Leisure & Hospitality Companies; Importers/Exporters (domiciled in North America); Service Industry Firms. I do not charge up-front/application fees for JV/ equity investment opportunities. Some fees necessary,disclosed up front, as work is done if credit facillities are requested/required. Thank you. MC

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Texas

I have invested in several Joint Ventures and have made some pretty good decisions in the past and hope to keep this track record.

$0 to $100,000

United States > Connecticut

My investments have been in the traditional outlets of privately held companies and real estate. Have been in advertising for 27 years as a senior manager in large companies and a start-up. My partner and I are new angel investors who would like to participate in the development of a new or established business.

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > New York

Have done over 15 Angel investments. I manage a fund for startup investing in the Hudson Valley.

$25,000 to $150,000

United States > Nevada

seeking secure investment opportunities in either mature or new industries

$0 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

I am an investor in the New York area seeking a business to invest in. i have experience is retail and the food service industry as well as banking and the military. I am really open-minded, hard working, educated and ambitious. I have a degree in Business Management and am pursuing my second degree in the same category. I consider myself as an individual investor, I had dreams of starting my own business however I decided I would like to invest instead. I will consider any reasonable investment opportunity. Ideally, I would like to be partner as opposed to simply an investor

$0 to $20,000

United States > New York

I'm a private investor looking for alternative investments. I've worked in the financial services industry for the last 20 years.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

I am 33 years old, single person with my own business , new in NYC looking for new opportunities and ideas to find new partners

$15,000 to $20,000