New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New Jersey

Real Estate Investor

$1,000 to $2,000

United States > California

We are direct lending groups. We specialize in multifamily, apartment building, strip mall, office building, warehouse and most categories of residential and commercial properties. Alternative energy projects such as wind and solar projects. You will need 1 to 3 page summary for our review. We also fund start-up trucking companies.

$2,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > New York

I built a small business from my bootstraps and recently sold the majority ownership share. I know what hard work it takes to build a business. I'm looking forward to hearing about many ideas!

$1,000 to $15,000

United States > Arizona

I work directly with private individuals who have been investing in private funds for over 20 years. We fund almost any type of project and/or business. Terms and investments are on a case by case basis, and may be syndicated amongst our investment partners.

$10,000,000 to $9,000,000,000

Canada > Medicine Hat

I am single, age is 40 and location is Canada. Anticipated involvement is advisory Status is I represent a group of venture capitalists/investors

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Arizona

STONEBRIDGE CAPITAL GROUP (STONEBRIDGE) has access to substantial pools of capital; sophisticated, long-term investors; and highly tailored financing structures for upstream, midstream, and service sector E&P companies. STONEBRIDGE SPECIALIZES IN: • Mezzanine financing for developmental drilling for companies with undeveloped reserves and fundamentally-strong development plans • Acquisitions • JV Partnerships • IPO (our group specializes in Mid-market IPO's, public offerings and advisory assignments; in 2013, our group raised over $20 billion for nearly 100 clients) • Institutional Investors • Private Investors • Growth Acceleration • Companies with proven, experienced management in place • Companies that need a strategic financial partner • Companies with successful exploration programs, but that are too early for bank financing given the ramp-up in production needed to hold acreage/leases

$10,000,000 to $99,000,000

United States > New York

Commercial lending, nationwide and International funding, multi-family housing, all business types. 7+ years of commercial and residential lending experience. SBA, private, and commercial funding available.

$0 to $100,000,000

United States > New York

I am a Physician. I live in Buffalo NY. I have done some small business lending and investing from my self directed IRA. Unfortunately, as has been the case for many investors, I have been taken advantage of by scammers in the past. it happens. The result is, and please do not take personally, regardless of how sound, innovative, outstanding and potentially profitable your business idea may be, and regardless of the amount requested, I am going to have to do extreme due diligence and create iron clad contracts. Thank you for your understanding

$5,000 to $50,000